Wednesday 18 December 2019
Tuesday 17 December 2019
Monday 16 December 2019
Monday 9 December 2019
Sunday 8 December 2019
Thursday 5 December 2019
Wednesday 4 December 2019
Tuesday 3 December 2019
Monday 2 December 2019
Sunday 1 December 2019
Tuesday 26 November 2019
Wednesday 20 November 2019
Tuesday 19 November 2019
Sunday 17 November 2019
Thursday 14 November 2019
Wednesday 13 November 2019
Tuesday 12 November 2019
Tuesday 5 November 2019
Sunday 3 November 2019
Thursday 31 October 2019
Wednesday 30 October 2019
Tuesday 29 October 2019
Thursday 24 October 2019
Wednesday 23 October 2019
Tuesday 22 October 2019
Monday 21 October 2019
Sunday 20 October 2019
Thursday 17 October 2019
Wednesday 16 October 2019
Tuesday 15 October 2019
Monday 14 October 2019
Wednesday 25 September 2019
Sentence starters
Was this a magic spell cast by a wizard or an illusion. Immediately
water
started coming out of the bottom of the house and the big bulky gas bottles
went through the roof of the next-door neighbors and ignited a fire. The power
went out and all the power lines were on fire.
water
started coming out of the bottom of the house and the big bulky gas bottles
went through the roof of the next-door neighbors and ignited a fire. The power
went out and all the power lines were on fire.
Just a second later disaster struck Amelie's house and everyone's house
was on fire. Suddenly the fire truck pulled up the red and
blue sirens, alerted everyone that they might survive.
was on fire. Suddenly the fire truck pulled up the red and
blue sirens, alerted everyone that they might survive.
Amelie saw firefighters smash windows of other houses to let
people evacuate. This was like a scene in a horror movie.
\Crack! Amelie’s window was gone. All of a sudden she saw
a firefighter the firefighter said to Amelie to jump on the ladder.
Amelie was scared but she knew this was the only way she
could survive….
people evacuate. This was like a scene in a horror movie.
\Crack! Amelie’s window was gone. All of a sudden she saw
a firefighter the firefighter said to Amelie to jump on the ladder.
Amelie was scared but she knew this was the only way she
could survive….
Tuesday 24 September 2019
Thursday 19 September 2019
Tuesday 17 September 2019
Sunday 15 September 2019
Thursday 12 September 2019
Wednesday 11 September 2019
Tuesday 10 September 2019
Thursday 5 September 2019
Wednesday 4 September 2019
Monday 2 September 2019
Thursday 29 August 2019
Wednesday 28 August 2019
Monday 26 August 2019
Sunday 25 August 2019
Thursday 22 August 2019
Wednesday 21 August 2019
Tuesday 20 August 2019
Monday 19 August 2019
Sunday 18 August 2019
Tuesday 13 August 2019
Monday 12 August 2019
Thursday 8 August 2019
Wednesday 7 August 2019
Tuesday 6 August 2019
Thursday 1 August 2019
Wednesday 31 July 2019
Tuesday 30 July 2019
Why do stars twinkle ?
When you look up at the dark black sky you
will see some stars, I mean a million of them.
Well stars look as if they shimmer in the sky however
they actually don’t, It’s just your eyes trying to play a
trick on you.
They scintillate because it’s just the atmosphere,
when you look in the telescope the stars won’t
really look like they are glistening because it is
out of atmosphere.
I hope you now know that stars don’t actually
twinkle it’s just your eyes tricking you.
In order to succeed you need to add more
elaboration and try working on your handwriting
however I liked your ideas and structure of
language By Aisha.
Monday 29 July 2019
Monday 22 July 2019
Aleena's Speech Judging sheet.
Speech Judging Sheet
Aleena Topic: why we should not share food at school.
Category
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Main Points
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Self Assessment
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Low High
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1 2 3 4 5
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Structure
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My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.
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3
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Delivery
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I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.
My voice was clear and loud. I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.
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I think I need to do more gestures and more eye contact so I will give myself 2.
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Content
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My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.
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3
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Language
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I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech. I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)
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I didn’t use any of these so I think I’m 1.
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Time
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My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.
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1
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Next time I need to …
Have more expression, more ideas and speak loudly.
Teacher Comment
- Good persuasive language eg ‘in my opinion’
- You had some clever ideas especially about vegetarians and being allergic to food.
- You had a little delay in you delivery however you recovered well and just continued with your speech. Well done for not letting this delay distract you too much.
- Try and include more expression next time.
Monday 1 July 2019
Aleena's Key Competencies.
Halsey Drive School
A = Almost Always
S = Sometimes
N = Not yet
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1st half of the year
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2nd half of the year
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Student
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Teacher
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Student
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Teacher
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Managing Self
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I am organised for the day
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S
| S | ||
I am willing to try new things
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S
| S | ||
I complete work to the best of my ability and show initiative
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S
| S | ||
I begin work straight away, stay on task and work independently
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A
| A | ||
I can set realistic goals and explain how to achieve them
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A
| S | ||
I make sensible behaviour choices
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A
| A | ||
I happily take part in all school activities
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S
| S | ||
Relating to Others
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I cooperate well with others when working
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A
| A | ||
I treat others with respect
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A
| A | ||
I am a good friend and role model - especially at break times
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A
| A | ||
I show good manners and cooperate with others
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A
| A | ||
Participating and Contributing
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I share my ideas and opinions with others
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S
| N | ||
I listen well to other people’s opinions
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A
| A | ||
I take part in activities outside of the classroom
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S
| N | ||
Thinking
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I ask relevant questions to deepen my knowledge
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A
| N | ||
I reflect on my own learning and say what I need to learn next
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A
| S | ||
Language Symbols and Texts
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I use a range of IT to share my learning
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A
| A | ||
Monday 24 June 2019
Wednesday 19 June 2019
Tuesday 18 June 2019
Sunday 16 June 2019
Tuesday 11 June 2019
Why people should not use phones while driving.
Why drivers should be banned from using cellphones
while driving .
In my opinion drivers should be banned from using
cellphones and here are some examples of why
we should not do that.
Since people are using cellphones while they’re
driving,it can be a lot dangerous. If the red light turns
on and the driver is not concentrating on the road
there
might be injuries and then lots of people would be dying.
Also if some children and other people were crossing
the road and you were just messaging somebody
the people will get hurt. Not only just the people think
about that the children will also get hurt and that is
so not good at all.
Conclusion I hope you guys understand that
we should not use phones while driving it is a
lot Dangerous .Comment I Aisha have read your
writing the first paragraph is only a sentence and
the 2nd one I think you should improve on that and
add more elaboration [more detail] But i love the way
you are using capital letters and full stops.
Sunday 9 June 2019
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