Wednesday 31 July 2019
Tuesday 30 July 2019
Why do stars twinkle ?
When you look up at the dark black sky you
will see some stars, I mean a million of them.
Well stars look as if they shimmer in the sky however
they actually don’t, It’s just your eyes trying to play a
trick on you.
They scintillate because it’s just the atmosphere,
when you look in the telescope the stars won’t
really look like they are glistening because it is
out of atmosphere.
I hope you now know that stars don’t actually
twinkle it’s just your eyes tricking you.
In order to succeed you need to add more
elaboration and try working on your handwriting
however I liked your ideas and structure of
language By Aisha.
Monday 29 July 2019
Monday 22 July 2019
Aleena's Speech Judging sheet.
Speech Judging Sheet
Aleena Topic: why we should not share food at school.
Category
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Main Points
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Self Assessment
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Low High
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1 2 3 4 5
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Structure
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My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.
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3
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Delivery
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I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.
My voice was clear and loud. I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.
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I think I need to do more gestures and more eye contact so I will give myself 2.
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Content
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My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.
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3
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Language
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I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech. I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)
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I didn’t use any of these so I think I’m 1.
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Time
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My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.
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1
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Next time I need to …
Have more expression, more ideas and speak loudly.
Teacher Comment
- Good persuasive language eg ‘in my opinion’
- You had some clever ideas especially about vegetarians and being allergic to food.
- You had a little delay in you delivery however you recovered well and just continued with your speech. Well done for not letting this delay distract you too much.
- Try and include more expression next time.
Monday 1 July 2019
Aleena's Key Competencies.
Halsey Drive School
A = Almost Always
S = Sometimes
N = Not yet
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1st half of the year
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2nd half of the year
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Student
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Teacher
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Student
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Teacher
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Managing Self
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I am organised for the day
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S
| S | ||
I am willing to try new things
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S
| S | ||
I complete work to the best of my ability and show initiative
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S
| S | ||
I begin work straight away, stay on task and work independently
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A
| A | ||
I can set realistic goals and explain how to achieve them
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A
| S | ||
I make sensible behaviour choices
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A
| A | ||
I happily take part in all school activities
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S
| S | ||
Relating to Others
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I cooperate well with others when working
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A
| A | ||
I treat others with respect
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A
| A | ||
I am a good friend and role model - especially at break times
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A
| A | ||
I show good manners and cooperate with others
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A
| A | ||
Participating and Contributing
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I share my ideas and opinions with others
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S
| N | ||
I listen well to other people’s opinions
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A
| A | ||
I take part in activities outside of the classroom
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S
| N | ||
Thinking
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I ask relevant questions to deepen my knowledge
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A
| N | ||
I reflect on my own learning and say what I need to learn next
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A
| S | ||
Language Symbols and Texts
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I use a range of IT to share my learning
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A
| A | ||
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