When you look up at the dark black sky you
will see some stars, I mean a million of them.
Well stars look as if they shimmer in the sky however
they actually don’t, It’s just your eyes trying to play a
trick on you.
They scintillate because it’s just the atmosphere,
when you look in the telescope the stars won’t
really look like they are glistening because it is
out of atmosphere.
I hope you now know that stars don’t actually
twinkle it’s just your eyes tricking you.
In order to succeed you need to add more
elaboration and try working on your handwriting
however I liked your ideas and structure of
language By Aisha.
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