The soccer ball's feelings

Hi guys today I will be telling you about how unlucky a
soccer
ball can be, just read my writing and then you will see.

Ow! Ouch! Ouch! Ouch!,this really hurts these people
are keep kicking on my face am I going to die like this ?

Well I wish that I could be a human instead of this
soccer ball this is so annoying, that

‘’Why do they have to kick on us, what’s wrong with
them ?’’

Eww! Now I can smell the disgusting shoe’’, I hate
this Uhh!!

‘’Now a child dropped me on a hamburger’’,

‘’Hey you destroyed my hamburger’’   the sister
angrily said to to the child

‘’Umm.. sorry I didn't mean to do that’’

‘’Uh you are the worst brother in the world !!’’ the
sister crossly said and stomped away.

I don’t even know how badly they are going to kick
me ,I’m about to cry !!

Help me !!

‘I'm going  to win and you are going to be the loser
of the day’’ the man complained

‘’No you are going to be the loser and I am going to
win’’ ! the man replied back.

These people were keep complaining only just they
wanted to win.

I think I will end here and Bye !!.

Comment  I Janya have read your writing and loved
your speech marks but maybe you could add more.

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Why school uniforms should be banned from school.

In my opinion school uniforms should

be banned from school and here are

some ideas from my brain that why

we should wear mufti clothes at

school.

The reason why school uniforms

should be banned from school is

that we only get to wear one

colour all the time we don’t

even get to wear other bright

colours to school I am so

tired of wearing one colour

to school.

Another reason is that your

uniform might get dirty by

wearing the same uniform for

five days isn’t that so annoying,

for me it is a lot.Well guys the

teacher should talk to Miss

Davies Crook about this matter

and even I am saying that we

should wear different coloured

shoes to school.  Comment I Samantha

like how you use punctuation such

as commas.

Why people should not share food at school.

In my opinion we should not share food at school

and here are some examples of why we should

not do that.

First of all that we should not share food at

school is that some people are vegetarian and

some people are allergic to some food and another

reason is that people are already not allowed to

share food at school.

However our school’s principal Miss Davies

Crook

already said that thing but people still not

follow the instructions ‘’Why is that?’’   You

should listen to

her because she is the school’s principal.

So as I Am saying so if you share food you

get

into real trouble. You guys have to eat your own

food that your mum or dad have gave you,and

even if you don’t like it ,it mean that you have to

share food.  Conclusion- I hope you guys agreed

with me and hope you understand that we should not

share food at school Bye!

Comment ;  I Aurel like the way you used speech

marks maybe you could have added this ! at the

end of share food.

Jump Jam

Today we did whole school Jump Jam

and we danced on four songs. The

songs that we danced to were: one

‘Coconut’ and two more songs which

I didn’t know.

As soon as we went outside our

classroom, the children were

starting

to act boisterously but later we

saw Brett he was the one who dances

and makes videos.

Later Brett spoke in the microphone

and everybody went muted, then Brett

 danced really well and it was

impossible to dance like him.Finally

we had finished dancing and quietly

we went  to our own classrooms and

started to do our learning

I love it  but i really love that

word boisterously.Aisha

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Why scooters should be banned from school

In my opinion we should not allow scooters

at school because it might be dangerous.

Scooting should not be allowed at school because

scooters go pretty fast and it will knock some

Junior children. Another reason that scooters

should be banned from school because if you are

riding the scooter really fast there might be a big

rock and you will fall down.

For example if you are riding a scooter at school

you might lose your balance and fall down.

It’s not just dangerous for little kids but it is

also dangerous for yourself at school that is

why scooters should be banned from school.

I Sanah have read your writing and I love your

vocab like knock.