Hi guys today I will be telling you about how unlucky a 
soccer
ball can be, just read my writing and then you will see.
soccer
ball can be, just read my writing and then you will see.
Ow! Ouch! Ouch! Ouch!,this really hurts these people 
are keep kicking on my face am I going to die like this ?
are keep kicking on my face am I going to die like this ?
Well I wish that I could be a human instead of this 
soccer ball this is so annoying, that
soccer ball this is so annoying, that
‘’Why do they have to kick on us, what’s wrong with
them ?’’
them ?’’
Eww! Now I can smell the disgusting shoe’’, I hate
this Uhh!!
this Uhh!!
‘’Now a child dropped me on a hamburger’’, 
‘’Hey you destroyed my hamburger’’   the sister 
angrily said to to the child
angrily said to to the child
‘’Umm.. sorry I didn't mean to do that’’
‘’Uh you are the worst brother in the world !!’’ the 
sister crossly said and stomped away.
sister crossly said and stomped away.
I don’t even know how badly they are going to kick 
me ,I’m about to cry !!
me ,I’m about to cry !!
Help me !!
‘I'm going  to win and you are going to be the loser 
of the day’’ the man complained
of the day’’ the man complained
‘’No you are going to be the loser and I am going to 
win’’ ! the man replied back.
win’’ ! the man replied back.
These people were keep complaining only just they
wanted to win.
wanted to win.
I think I will end here and Bye !!.
Comment  I Janya have read your writing and loved 
your speech marks but maybe you could add more.
your speech marks but maybe you could add more.
 
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